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<  OOC  ~  New Character Ideas...

PostPosted: Sun Jun 08, 2003 12:35 pm Reply with quote
User avatarVentruePosts: 1553Location: Virginia, USAJoined: Fri Apr 04, 2003 5:05 pm
Was thinking of new character ideas (no not a replacement for Gabriel, just a side story) and was thinking of a first person story from the view of a mortal down and out boxer who gets clobbered by a Kindred boxer and eventually unravels the Masquerade in Cascadia...

...and is subsequently 'dealt with'.

What do you all think?

Sample:

Gotta keep movin'. This kid's quick but not that quick. I weave side to side, duckin' and bobbin' like I've been at it my whole life. Hell I practically have.

[i:57b41b0209]Roy Giggliotti with some impressive footwork tonight, wouldn't you say Jimmy?

That's right Troy, I'd say we're getting a glimpse of the classic Giggliotti tonight, the way many of us remember him in his prime.[/i:57b41b0209]

The kid suckers me with a jab-hook combination. Jesus, he hits like a sledgehammer for such a runt. He's grinning now, looks a damned monkey with that mouth piece in. I swing, a miss, I jab, another miss.

But no one escapes Roy's classic right. Heh, caught him. He stumbles and I move in, like a vulture. Never underestimate experience junior. Rule number one.

[i:57b41b0209]Suarez stumbling now, he looked a bit dazed from that one Troy![/i:57b41b0209]

The kid glances up at me and I can see in his eyes that the last shot did nothing. He's playing it up! What can he be holding back?!



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